Thursday 30 August 2012

mother earth


  1. Planet Earth is a article about the earth. This article is nonfiction because the earth is supposedly talking to us and its telling us that we need to leave the earth. This is why mother earth is sending all those terrible things like hurricanes, floods, earthquakes, tsunamis, tornadoes and many other bad things. What does not make sense about this story is that earth talk to us and tell us that we need to go to mars or somewhere else. The earth claims that she has done everything in her power to make us leave. Earth also claims that with all the extreme technology that we have came up with that we have try to outsmart mother earth. The tone to this story is a little bit tricky because its has a lot of science but really is not educate in my opinion I would think is to entertain because you  really do not learn much from this article; the author is just approaching the subject from a different side. By the author adding personification it changes the total story and makes the reader visualise the earth as a human or at least that it has its mind of its own. Over all I do not like this story, I think it is boring because it does not have absolutely anything interesting. If at least it was in a scientific version but all this personification nonsense is out of the picture, in my opinion. I just hope that the stories get better because it is really hard and frustrating to write about something that does not have any appeal to.



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